Title: Hey Look At This 8d
Description: Something that's not fanart
estrayastar - August 24, 2007 05:25 AM (GMT)
http://estrayastar.deviantart.com/art/Thre...d-Cast-63017269This is the cover to my comic book thing.... I was just wondering if anybody could give me advice on how to make it better. n.n
I worked like 5 hours on this, and so you know three of the characters are weird colors (blue and stuff) for a reason, and two look similar for a reason too ^^;
And yes I know my main character looks kinda like Elliott - that's because when i designed him I couldn't draw guys so i used pictures of Elliott to help me lol
SO YEEEEEEEEAHHHHHHH (I'm hyper 8D)
EDIT: why does it always make my d's smaller, I wanted the title to say 8D))
junker3 - August 25, 2007 12:21 AM (GMT)
it looks good to me! way better than i could do.
estrayastar - August 25, 2007 05:32 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (junker3 @ Aug 24 2007, 08:21 PM) |
| it looks good to me! way better than i could do. |
Aw, thank you :]
dtrowbridge - August 25, 2007 12:51 PM (GMT)
OK I am going to give you some Simon Cowell type feedback...take it if you want.
1. Most of the art that you have previously posted has been amatuerish and typical of most teenage artists from junior high.
2 This peice however is much better, and it shows a lot of potential.
3. If you want to make this your career, and be a professional...you will need to work hard and perhaps take a few lessons.
4. To finish this peice you need to complete a background color w/ a thin border..a pale green might make it pop. or pale orange.
Linda4Elliott - August 25, 2007 01:02 PM (GMT)
I don't think your drawings look like junior high art. I especially love this piece of you and Elliott.
http://etrainstation.com/index.php?showtopic=13215 estrayastar - August 25, 2007 09:34 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (dtrowbridge @ Aug 25 2007, 08:51 AM) |
OK I am going to give you some Simon Cowell type feedback...take it if you want.
1. Most of the art that you have previously posted has been amatuerish and typical of most teenage artists from junior high.
2 This peice however is much better, and it shows a lot of potential.
3. If you want to make this your career, and be a professional...you will need to work hard and perhaps take a few lessons.
4. To finish this peice you need to complete a background color w/ a thin border..a pale green might make it pop. or pale orange. |
No it's fine, that's what I wanted actually ^^
I'm not sure about the background though, because I like the white... but I could try it digitally and see how it looks.
Thank you :]
estrayastar - August 25, 2007 09:36 PM (GMT)
Thank you!
But since I am (well on Tuesday not anymore) junior high i don't mind, but I really want to get better and prove myself, because I'm taking my art class with sophomores and not the one most freshman take..
Linda4Elliott - August 26, 2007 12:07 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (estrayastar @ Aug 25 2007, 04:36 PM) |
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Thank you!
But since I am (well on Tuesday not anymore) junior high i don't mind, but I really want to get better and prove myself, because I'm taking my art class with sophomores and not the one most freshman take..
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good for you! I think you have lots of potential and great that you are willing to do what it takes to improve.
dtrowbridge - August 27, 2007 06:19 AM (GMT)
Very amazing Estrayastar....Elliott would be proud of you for excepting the feedback and learning from it.
If you like the white...then just frame the art in a thin border to hold the image together in the veiwers eye. The line could be a bit wavy to fit the style of the peice.
It is a great improvment over your previous drawings...and the medium suits it your style better than pencil.
Now get a light box and practice, practice, practice.